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Using an anecdote helps paint a better picture, making the situation more familiar or understandable to the reader.

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When writing an encyclopedia essay, you should provide, precise and summarized information on the topic at hand. The information should primarily pertain to that topic and not suggest other ideas or trains of thought.

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I used the vocabulary words suggested at the start of the story because they are strong and help the reader to gain a deeper understanding of the feeling of the piece.