Charity Shopping Essay Example

my writing isn't littered with adjectives and adverbs this keeps in with my Genre and keeps it from being too sophisticated, I wasn't aiming for literary piece. I also used personal language such as 'Bad times! which is conventional and conversational making this more personal to my audience establishing intimacy and collaboration with my audience. I also included one-word sentences, 'but this is not law. Unfortunately. ' the unfortunately being my opinion on the matter. The tone mainly focused on positives highlighting negatives of charity shopping but coming to a positive conclusion.

I used Vintage shops as an example 'Vintage shops have a lot more stock ... ' but after I used reasoning behind this ' I've heard of vintage shops/shop owners and ... this turning the negative positive. I added a anecdote about my experience with charity and vintage shops story which I feel gives it a personal touch and insight into what I'm talking about. I used a bit of humour unlike my style model which purpose isn't humorous but I still tried to keep it 'dry' as I don't want to over use it making the advice seem more of a joke then good advice; here are some examples of humour ' rather intimidatingly stylish man', ' my girlfriend was just going to have to wait', not in your face jokes but attempts to engage the reader.