Internal and External Violence in Short Fiction Essay Example

God for help. Of course none of this works but it makes a point. It makes the point that when faced with the fear of external violence, people will do anything to get out of it, and it puts a large strain on the victims emotions. The mere threat itself is internal violence because of this. Ralph Ellison’s “Battle Royal” depicts external violence in a very forward manner.

Ellison describes an evening in which ten black men are first forced to fight blindfolded, and then made to crawl on an electrified carpet to get their cash prize. “Everyone fought hysterically.” Ellison writes, “It was complete anarchy. Everybody fought everybody else. No group fought together long. Two, three, four, fought one, then turned to fight each other, were themselves attacked (Charters 453).” Directly after the fight the combatants are forced to crawl over an electrified carpet to collect money. The men are forced to degrade themselves by crawling around trying to grab money, the whole time being electrocuted, to the amusement of the audience, there for a night of entertainment. These events were not only an example of external violence, but internal as well. The external violence was also in a sense internal because the whole point of it was to degrade and embarrass the participants. The room full of white men where there simply to watch the black men entertain them, fight for them, and suffer for them. The laughter of the crowd was equally as violent as the fight.

Instead of punches being thrown, words and emotions were. The reader is given a good sense of how the narrator is being mentally beaten, as well as

physically, once he starts to give his speech, which was the reason he was at the event in the first place. As soon as the speech began, the crowd yelled for the narrator to speak up, so he was forced to practically yell the entire speech (even though most of the crowd was not listening), directly after being in a grueling fight. “I spoke even louder in spite of the pain. But still they talked and still they laughed, as though deaf with cotton in In “This Way for the Gas Ladies and Gentlemen,” Tadeusz Borowski describes internal violence with great ability. There is very little external, or physical violence shown in the story, but there is a great display of mental violence shown, which is characteristic of the topic. World War II had a lot to do with internal violence. Granted there was plenty of external violence, even to a nightmarish extent, but the worst damage was done to those who lived through the entire ordeal. The story shows how the prisoners themselves were degraded to a point where they no longer felt sorry for themselves.

Instead they felt anger towards those in their same situation, and those in a position much worse than their own, though it is not their fault. The external, and internal violence they had to deal with ruined them internally and made them cynical and angry. Borowski writes: “‘Listen, Henri, are we good people?’ ‘That’s stupid. Why do you ask?’ ‘You see, my friend, you see, I don’t know why, but I am furious, simply furious with these people -- furious because I must be here because of them. I

feel no pity. I am not sorry they’re going to the gas chamber. Damn them all! I could throw myself at them, beat them with my fists...’” Henri responds that the easiest way to relieve hate is to turn that hate against someone weaker (Charters 186). This is part of how internal violence works. Henri and Tadeusz have been in the camp for a while, and have been themselves abused the whole time.

Now they are on the loading ramps, being worked to exhaustion and they have nowhere to vent their anger than at those being sent to their deaths. They themselves are limited to internal violence. The external violence is left to the Nazis, who use it not for its own power, but because the endless external violence acts as internal violence, which is stronger in many ways the external violence. You can only whip a man so long before he stops feeling the pain, but if you attack his emotions, if you wear him down, he will be in your power, because there is nothing he can do. The prisoners can not fight back, so all they can do is take out their aggression on the few people who are yet Don DeLillo’s “Videotape,” deals with violence differently. The focus of the story is not the violence it self, but the effect that it has on people. In recent times, people have become desensitized to violence, because we see it all the time. In the news, movies and in video games.

The little girl who videotapes the murder in the story is different however, because she hasn’t been conditioned to the violence yet. When she

sees the man in the car get shot, she physically jumps at the sight, yet the man watching on the news is excitedly calling in his wife to see the murder on television. The viewing of violence can lead to a different type of internal violence. A violence inside the viewers head brought on by the sight of something so terrible that it even phases a grown man, this day in age. “The horror freezes your soul but this doesn’t mean you want them to stop,” DeLillo writes. The repetitive viewing of violence today causes people to stop caring about the violence in the world and it changes them, it makes them want to see it. Its almost addicting to see someone get shot while driving along on the highway. This is something that can happen to anyone, and that what makes is so emotionally violent. It forces the reader to rethink how they live their lives, and it makes them think that something like that could happen to them. They could be walking down the street and they next thing they know, they are dead. Only real life, external violence can bring out this feeling of helplessness, and this is what internal violence is about. Its about fear, and helplessness because you realize that you too can die, and there is nothing you can do Every day you can watch the news and see examples of violence. Its all over, and everyone has seen it.

It seems that at least every few months there is another high school shooting where a teen rages against the society they live in the only way they know how,

through violence, both internal and external. Internal because of the way they change the lives of those who live through the ordeal, and have the rest of their lives to think about how they saw their best friend get shot in school one day. External violence is directly related to internal violence because extreme violence, in person, scares people.